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A closeted writer struggling with addiction searches for the murderer of his secret lover as he delves deeper into his revenge fantasies.
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When a spell is set upon the land a young warrior must fight for her independence.
To Piggyback off what Cajsa said: ----- When (An evil wizard) casts a spell upon the land (Entrapping the people) a (young) warrior must discover how to destroy the evil magic if she's to (Free her people) ----- 1: Is there a better adjective you can use instead of 'young' to describe the protagonisRead more
To Piggyback off what Cajsa said:
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When (An evil wizard) casts a spell upon the land (Entrapping the people) a (young) warrior must discover how to destroy the evil magic if she’s to (Free her people)
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1: Is there a better adjective you can use instead of ‘young’ to describe the protagonist?
2: Is the warrior fighting for her independence or to free the land?
3: As Cajsa asked, what does the spell do, I wrote, entrapping the people, but that was just a guess.
4: Same as number 3, I had to guess that it was an evil wizard who cast the spell, not sure if I got that right.
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See lessWhen the wife of a cheating writer is gone, he must get her back
This logline needs just a little more. Perhaps tell us what he must do to get his wife back. (if this is an example logline I don't think I have seen the movie) Does the writer need to change his ways to win back his wife? Does he need to complete some epic task or perhaps prove his love in some speRead more
This logline needs just a little more.
Perhaps tell us what he must do to get his wife back. (if this is an example logline I don’t think I have seen the movie)
Does the writer need to change his ways to win back his wife? Does he need to complete some epic task or perhaps prove his love in some specific way?
Also, you should personalize the beginning of this logline.
“When his wife leaves him, a cheating writer must, (Do this thing) in order to win her back”
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