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In the distant future, a brilliant, but timid theoretical physicist must accompany a team of reckless specialists and go back in time to prevent the last world war from ending to avert even greater atrocities.
Possible Title: Give War a Chance
Possible Title: Give War a Chance
See lessIn the distant future, a brilliant, but timid theoretical physicist must accompany a team of reckless specialists and go back in time to prevent the last world war from ending to avert even greater atrocities.
You might want to do a slight correction to this logline. Unless I am wrong I don't think they want to prevent "the stop of the last world war..." That would mean they would want the last world war to continue... which is actually kinda interesting. I am thinking it is a typo and a quick edit to fixRead more
You might want to do a slight correction to this logline.
Unless I am wrong I don’t think they want to prevent “the stop of the last world war…” That would mean they would want the last world war to continue… which is actually kinda interesting.
I am thinking it is a typo and a quick edit to fix.
However, if it is a typo I kinda like it. In the middle of the last world war (In the future) there was a peace deal. The war stopped but the ensuing peace caused the end of most life on the planet, so now the lead and his reckless team must go back in time to sabotage the peace deal and let the world war run its course… lol. If it is a typo, it’s a good one!
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Your logline answers its own dramatic question Problem: Lead character is uninspired. Answer: Lead character finds love and with it her inspiration Problem solved. The End This is an issue is because story is conflict and as written, there is no conflict in the logline.
Your logline answers its own dramatic question
Problem: Lead character is uninspired.
Answer: Lead character finds love and with it her inspiration
Problem solved. The End
This is an issue is because story is conflict and as written, there is no conflict in the logline.
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