1. Posted: March 23, 2017In:

    A military bioweapons collector engages in a game of ?cat and mouse? with his Russian counterpart who is also his former lover . The mysterious, subterranean world of the Taino Indians hides the only cure for the outbreak of an emerging virus. He has only hours amid growing civil unrest to find the cure before the virus destroys the tropical ?paradise? and releases a global pandemic.

    Richiev Singularity

    "When a virus outbreak threatens the tropical island he is on, a military bioweapons collector must enter a Taino Indian subterranean cave system in pursuit of a cure, while being perused by his former lover turned enemy."

    “When a virus outbreak threatens the tropical island he is on, a military bioweapons collector must enter a Taino Indian subterranean cave system in pursuit of a cure, while being perused by his former lover turned enemy.”

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  2. Posted: March 23, 2017In:

    A bad driver tries his best to save his job as an uber driver, finds his next trip with a terrorist who wants to explode a court with a bomb.

    Richiev Singularity

    While both ideas are good for the script, in the logline your character should have one goal. Since stopping a terrorist attack is more compelling than saving his job I would concentrate on that story line for the sake of the logline and leave the 'saving his job' story line for the script itself.

    While both ideas are good for the script, in the logline your character should have one goal. Since stopping a terrorist attack is more compelling than saving his job I would concentrate on that story line for the sake of the logline and leave the ‘saving his job’ story line for the script itself.

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  3. Posted: March 23, 2017In:

    When a rising number of victims are found brutally murdered one by one at a remote Veteran Hospital off the main land, a rookie detective and her seasoned partner must race against time to find the killer but not everyone is who they appear to be.

    Richiev Singularity

    I believe the idea itself is solid, (Although I am not sure if this would be police jurisdiction or FBI, that could be an issue) I would personalize it. One of the victims should be someone the lead character knows such as her brother or someone she served with in combat. That one specific death shoRead more

    I believe the idea itself is solid, (Although I am not sure if this would be police jurisdiction or FBI, that could be an issue)

    I would personalize it.
    One of the victims should be someone the lead character knows such as her brother or someone she served with in combat.
    That one specific death should be the inciting incident and that will shorten your set-up.
    Because that is the current problem with your logline, there is a lot of set up, which doesn’t leave a lot of room to inform us about story.

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