1. Posted: February 18, 2017In:

    When a young ward of the state is fostered to a crazy family planning a heist, he sets out to find his real father before being forced to engage in criminal activities that will see him back in juvenile prison.

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    Richiev Singularity

    "When he is fostered to a crazy family planning a heist. a young ward of the state must find his real father or be forced to engage in criminal activities that will send him back to juvenile detention."

    “When he is fostered to a crazy family planning a heist. a young ward of the state must find his real father or be forced to engage in criminal activities that will send him back to juvenile detention.”

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  2. Posted: February 18, 2017In:

    The dormant, youthful love of two hopeless romantics is suddenly ignited to life as they trade names to profess their love… and their identity.

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    This logline needs a little more. I have no understanding of the story from reading it.

    This logline needs a little more. I have no understanding of the story from reading it.

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  3. Posted: February 15, 2017In:

    A Shakespearian actor becomes unable to tell reality from a play. When his character Mercutio dies he wanders through what he believes is the afterlife distressing his family and friends. Title : A grave man

    Richiev Singularity

    A Shakespearean actor becomes unable to tell reality from a play... The event that causes him to become unable to tell reality from a play sounds like it would be the inciting incident. You might want to add that to the loglilne. (As long as you can do it without adding too many words)

    A Shakespearean actor becomes unable to tell reality from a play…

    The event that causes him to become unable to tell reality from a play sounds like it would be the inciting incident. You might want to add that to the loglilne. (As long as you can do it without adding too many words)

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