1. Posted: February 10, 2017In:

    Two forrest rangers, one a quiet loner and one a happily married father to be, while on the search for a child lost in the woods crash their helicopter far from any recognizable landmark they must survive the wilderness and find their way back.

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    When their helicopter crashes, two forest?rangers must survive the wild to make it back to civilization.

    When their helicopter crashes, two forest?rangers must survive the wild to make it back to civilization.

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  2. Posted: February 8, 2017In:

    Desperate to save her family farm, a dedicated cowgirl falls in love with a college-indebted loner, only to find out that they both compete against each other for $50,000 at the state rodeo.

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    I believe your logline is getting better. One minor point. After you tell us she needs the money then you should ?tell us how she plans to do it, (win the rodeo) after taht tell us the complication. (She falls for her main competitor) your logline has that backwards and I would look at Loemoemba's gRead more

    I believe your logline is getting better.

    One minor point. After you tell us she needs the money then you should ?tell us how she plans to do it, (win the rodeo) after taht tell us the complication. (She falls for her main competitor) your logline has that backwards and I would look at Loemoemba’s good example and switch it around.

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  3. Posted: February 8, 2017In:

    When she meets her old flame at a student reunion abroad, an engaged CEO must decide whether to cancel the wedding for the affair and move to a foreign country without any safety.

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    The logline is missing the hook. The logline needs that 'one extra thing' that makes the story stand out.

    The logline is missing the hook. The logline needs that ‘one extra thing’ that makes the story stand out.

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