1. Posted: February 9, 2017In:

    When a dedicated zookeeper ends up in an unorthodox animal shelter, she becomes fascinated by the back-to-basics-lifestyle of her unsociable boss and his adolescent son.

    Richiev Singularity

    I like the premise: ?If possible you might want to clarify what unorthodox means in terms of the shelter (If you can do it in just a few words, if it takes a whole paragraph then ignore this suggestion)

    I like the premise: ?If possible you might want to clarify what unorthodox means in terms of the shelter (If you can do it in just a few words, if it takes a whole paragraph then ignore this suggestion)

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  2. Posted: February 9, 2017In:

    When a recluse, who can use his memories to transfer his consciousness into his younger self, remembers a fragment of a repressed memory pertaining to the night his mother was murdered, he undergoes therapy to restore it in full so he can go back and save her life.

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    Is the story about the therapy?

    Is the story about the therapy?

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  3. Posted: February 8, 2017In:

    After a big heist, a problematic cop who spent years undercover in a gang, must come back to active when he finds out that the criminal that he’s always pursued is still loose.

    Richiev Singularity

    You buried the lead. "When he discovers the criminal he's always pursued is still on the loose, a former undercover cop..."

    You buried the lead.

    “When he discovers the criminal he’s always pursued is still on the loose, a former undercover cop…”

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