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  1. Posted: February 6, 2017In: SciFi

    When all traces of his existence are erased, and his wife and child with a man claiming to be him, a reporter must find out how and why he was deleted to recover his life and family.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 7, 2017 at 10:53 am

    "When all traces of his life are erased, a tenacious reporter must discover the who, what, where and why in order to get his life back."

    “When all traces of his life are erased, a tenacious reporter must discover the who, what, where and why in order to get his life back.”

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  2. Posted: February 7, 2017In: SciFi

    While in coma, a pessimistic former athlete must regain his self belief to help a police force, that operates within collective unconscious of humanity, stop a powerful psychic taking over everybody’s minds.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 7, 2017 at 10:50 am

    Another ?thing, because this is a special situation: stopping a psychic who is attacking peoples subconscious. It might help to tell us what special powers the lead character has that will let the reader know, he is the only one who can defeat the bad guy.You mention that the lead is an athlete butRead more

    Another ?thing, because this is a special situation: stopping a psychic who is attacking peoples subconscious. It might help to tell us what special powers the lead character has that will let the reader know, he is the only one who can defeat the bad guy.

    You mention that the lead is an athlete but I don’t see how that helps him fight a psychic.

    Does the lead come from a family of witches? Was the lead born with psychic powers? Was the lead struck by gamma radiation. Just any little hint on “Why him” will help.

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  3. Posted: February 7, 2017In: SciFi

    While in coma, a pessimistic former athlete must regain his self belief to help a police force, that operates within collective unconscious of humanity, stop a powerful psychic taking over everybody’s minds.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 7, 2017 at 10:45 am

    In order to stop a powerful psychic, the lead must "regain his self belief" That line doesn't quite connect with me because even if he does regain his self belief how will that stop a powerful psychic. Is there anything that the lead character must do in order to defeat the psychic? If so I would adRead more

    In order to stop a powerful psychic, the lead must “regain his self belief”

    That line doesn’t quite connect with me because even if he does regain his self belief how will that stop a powerful psychic.

    Is there anything that the lead character must do in order to defeat the psychic? If so I would add that to the logline.

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