1. Posted: February 4, 2017In:

    EDIT: After her farm goes into foreclosure, a naive cowgirl falls in love with a misogynistic cowboy, only to find out that they both compete against each other for $100,000 at a rodeo event.

    Richiev Singularity

    I actually liked the poetry angle.

    I actually liked the poetry angle.

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  2. Posted: February 4, 2017In:

    After his son confesses a murder to him, an obsessively upright police officer on the brink of a once in a lifetime promotion must use all his power and skills to destroy all evidence before the truth is uncovered.

    Richiev Singularity

    If his son has confessed I am not sure what the point would be. As for the rest I do get why a father might go against his nature in order to save his son.

    If his son has confessed I am not sure what the point would be.

    As for the rest I do get why a father might go against his nature in order to save his son.

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  3. Posted: March 18, 2016In:

    When a woman with incorruptible morals is targeted as an employee by gangsters her honesty and integrity are challenged when her beloved employees pull off the crime of the century.

    Richiev Singularity

    You give us two inciting incidents. I would start with the heist and then tell about the moral dilemma

    You give us two inciting incidents. I would start with the heist and then tell about the moral dilemma

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