1. Posted: February 4, 2017In:

    EDIT: After her farm goes into foreclosure, a naive cowgirl falls in love with a misogynistic cowboy, only to find out that they both compete against each other for $100,000 at a rodeo event.

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    Btw you have two inciting incidents. I would get rid of one. "Desperate to save her family farm, a dedicated cowgirl must win top prize at the state rodeo, but when she discovers her true love is also competing she must chose between love and family."

    Btw you have two inciting incidents. I would get rid of one.

    “Desperate to save her family farm, a dedicated cowgirl must win top prize at the state rodeo, but when she discovers her true love is also competing she must chose between love and family.”

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  2. Posted: February 5, 2017In:

    After witnessing a UFO crash landing, a precocious silver miner’s daughter tries to make sense of her place in the universe. Too bad, she?s brought the alien home with her.

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    When she accidentally brings an alien home with her, a precocious country girl must (do this thing) in order to (Stop this bad thing from happening)

    When she accidentally brings an alien home with her, a precocious country girl must (do this thing) in order to (Stop this bad thing from happening)

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  3. Posted: February 6, 2017In:

    When all traces of his existence are erased, and his wife and child with a man claiming to be him, a reporter must find out how and why he was deleted to recover his life and family.

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    Possible title: Invisible

    Possible title: Invisible

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