1. Posted: November 20, 2016In:

    A middle-aged writer who fears his dreams of fame may never come notices obscure fabrications in the nonfiction works of a famous author (think Malcolm Gladwell in stature) and publishes a series of scathing corrections, which attract increasing attention and lead him to commit his own questionable acts in pursuit of fame.

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    Richiev Singularity

    I think this is an interesting idea, I think the logline would be improved by stating the goal of the lead character. What does the lead character want?

    I think this is an interesting idea, I think the logline would be improved by stating the goal of the lead character. What does the lead character want?

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  2. Posted: November 19, 2016In:

    In order to graduate film school, a self-centered student documents his terminally ill father’s attempt to recapture the heart of a former lover, prior to her impending marriage.

    Richiev Singularity

    I have to agree with both dpg and Nir From reading your logline, it seems as if you have the wrong lead character, the father should actually be the lead character. However, if that is not the case then Nir is correct and the wording for the lead character's story line must be clearer in the loglineRead more

    I have to agree with both dpg and Nir

    From reading your logline, it seems as if you have the wrong lead character, the father should actually be the lead character.

    However, if that is not the case then Nir is correct and the wording for the lead character’s story line must be clearer in the logline.

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  3. Posted: November 15, 2016In:

    A series of interconnected stories about citizens adjusting to the new normal after an earthquake that destroyed 1500 hundred buildings and killed 185 people in Christchurch, New Zealand.

    Richiev Singularity

    Naming both the place and the disaster has helped the logline, however because there is no lead character it is hard for me to come up with a good logline example but here would be my attempt: ----- "When a terrible earthquake destroys Christchurch New Zealand, the survivors must rebuild their townRead more

    Naming both the place and the disaster has helped the logline, however because there is no lead character it is hard for me to come up with a good logline example but here would be my attempt:
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    “When a terrible earthquake destroys Christchurch New Zealand, the survivors must rebuild their town and their lives while facing increasingly more difficult problems in the process.”

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