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A series of interconnected stories about citizens adjusting to the new normal after an earthquake that destroyed 1500 hundred buildings and killed 185 people in Christchurch, New Zealand.
A few specifics will help this logline. Instead of 'natural disaster' tell us what disaster... After an earthquake... After a Hurricane... After Rosie O'Donald belly flops and causes a tsunami.Also there is no point in not naming the city, is it NY, is it LA, is it Nome Alaska????Finally, you shouldRead more
A few specifics will help this logline. Instead of ‘natural disaster’ tell us what disaster… After an earthquake… After a Hurricane… After Rosie O’Donald belly flops and causes a tsunami.
Also there is no point in not naming the city, is it NY, is it LA, is it Nome Alaska????
Finally, you should give us a lead character to relate to, give the lead a goal and something standing in the way. Even an ensemble cast has an ‘A’ story line
See lessTo find peace in herself, a girl must learn the ways of this new world and discover how she arrived. Those closest to her are the main suspects, and they will create hurdles to overcome.
When you say a character "Must" do something, you should give us the 'or else.' What are the stakes?
When you say a character “Must” do something, you should give us the ‘or else.’ What are the stakes?
See lessRescued from a life of bullying and abandonment, a young girl musters up the courage to battle a serpent who is holding her estranged father captive.
It would help if your inciting incident related to the goal. "When her estranged father is captured by an evil serpent..." Then you should tell us what she must do... For instance: "...A shy teenager must break into an occult museum to steal the only sword that can damage the creature." (Obviously yRead more
It would help if your inciting incident related to the goal.
“When her estranged father is captured by an evil serpent…”
Then you should tell us what she must do… For instance:
“…A shy teenager must break into an occult museum to steal the only sword that can damage the creature.” (Obviously your story would be different)
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