1. Posted: August 4, 2016In:

    Oskar, an overlooked and bullied boy, finds love and revenge through Eli, a beautiful but peculiar girl.

    Richiev Singularity

    Bullied by who? Is there a specific event?

    Bullied by who? Is there a specific event?

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  2. Posted: August 4, 2016In:

    An examination of sexual relationships, in which three protagonists interact in different combinations.

    Richiev Singularity

    This is more of a situation than a story.story is conflict, so the first question? What is the conflict? What is standing in the lead characters way?

    This is more of a situation than a story.

    story is conflict, so the first question? What is the conflict? What is standing in the lead characters way?

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  3. Posted: July 31, 2016In:

    When an image conscious love expert falls for the wrong guy, a crass hacker geek, her page views plummet, forcing her ruthless producer to manipulate her insecurities to tear them apart. 31 Words (Revised) (RomCom)

    Richiev Singularity

    The problem with the new logline attempt is, since the lead fall for the 'wrong guy', the producer is actually doing her a favor by trying to break her up. It is more meaningful is she falls for 'Mr. Right" the perfect guy and the producer self servingly tries to split up the couple.

    The problem with the new logline attempt is, since the lead fall for the ‘wrong guy’, the producer is actually doing her a favor by trying to break her up. It is more meaningful is she falls for ‘Mr. Right” the perfect guy and the producer self servingly tries to split up the couple.

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