1. Posted: August 4, 2016In:

    A struggling college student, plagued by his current state of being, discovers a device called the “God Helmet” and becomes the test subject for his Professor’s experiment.

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    "When a meek college student discovers a helmet which makes the wearer omnipotent, He begins using it to bring justice to the underprivileged but soon discovers with ultimate power comes ultimate corruption."

    “When a meek college student discovers a helmet which makes the wearer omnipotent, He begins using it to bring justice to the underprivileged but soon discovers with ultimate power comes ultimate corruption.”

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  2. Posted: July 31, 2016In:

    When an image conscious love expert falls for the wrong guy, a crass hacker geek, her page views plummet, forcing her ruthless producer to manipulate her insecurities to tear them apart. 31 Words (Revised) (RomCom)

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    You still haven't made the connection between the romance; and the producer dead set on breaking them up. ----- "When a popular but confrontational conservative political analyst falls for her liberal on air rival, her ruthless producer vows to tear them apart when she becomes 'kinder and gentler' aRead more

    You still haven’t made the connection between the romance; and the producer dead set on breaking them up.
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    “When a popular but confrontational conservative political analyst falls for her liberal on air rival, her ruthless producer vows to tear them apart when she becomes ‘kinder and gentler’ and ratings plummet.”
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    Here is an attempt from the point of view of the producer.
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    “When his online host, who’s known for putting the brutal in brutally honest, falls in love, a ruthless producer stops at nothing to destroy her relationship and stop ratings from plummeting.”
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    Hope that helped, good luck with this

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  3. Posted: August 2, 2016In:

    After he smack-cams a deranged vagabond, a prankish vlogger must fight to survive when the stranger invades his home sporting a bloody billhook.

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    You need a different lead character.The lead character should be a friend who had nothing to do with the "Prank"However the lead, the prankster and a bunch of teens are in the house (A party maybe) an the killer guts them one by one whether guilty or innocent.Now it's up to the lead character to stoRead more

    You need a different lead character.

    The lead character should be a friend who had nothing to do with the “Prank”

    However the lead, the prankster and a bunch of teens are in the house (A party maybe) an the killer guts them one by one whether guilty or innocent.

    Now it’s up to the lead character to stop the deranged homeless man.

    Hope that helped, good luck with this

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