1. Posted: June 15, 2016In:

    When his nuclear experiment erupts and infects a city?s atmosphere, a novice scientist covers up the accident and must concoct a cure before an aspiring journalist uncovers the truth.

    Richiev Singularity

    You haven't given us sufficient reason to root for the lead character, in fact after reading this, I am kinda pulling for the journalist to uncover the truth.

    You haven’t given us sufficient reason to root for the lead character, in fact after reading this, I am kinda pulling for the journalist to uncover the truth.

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  2. Posted: June 14, 2016In:

    When Air Force One crashes on an uncharted island, a sole-surviving publicist must safeguard nuclear codes and alert rescue before the ambitious terrorists who attacked the plane find him.

    Richiev Singularity

    dpg made a great point about your story, because a story must be consistent within the reality it's created. However with one little ?tweek I believe your story is still viable: ------------------------------------------------------------------------- When Air Force One crashes on an uncharted islanRead more

    dpg made a great point about your story, because a story must be consistent within the reality it’s created.

    However with one little ?tweek I believe your story is still viable:
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    When Air Force One crashes on an uncharted island, a conservative reporter must protect the only other survivor, the newly elected liberal President, before the ambitious terrorist who shot down the plane find her.

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    Hope that helps, good luck with this!

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  3. Posted: June 13, 2016In:

    After being exiled from her clan, a nymph seeks out her absent father in a populated, modern city.

    Richiev Singularity

    This is a logline that, if I hadn't been told it was in the comedy genre', I wouldn't have been able to tell just from reading it.

    This is a logline that, if I hadn’t been told it was in the comedy genre’, I wouldn’t have been able to tell just from reading it.

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