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In a dust chocked world where the rich live in air ships and the poor in muck a dethroned princess and desperate criminal must join forces to stop a megalomaniac from seizing absolute control.
When you say, 'avenge their families' this sounds like it could be your inciting incident: for instance... When her family is murdered, a dethroned princess must... (Then tell us what she must do) Then you should tell us why the 'criminal' is special. What skills does he have that will help the dethRead more
When you say, ‘avenge their families’ this sounds like it could be your inciting incident: for instance…
When her family is murdered, a dethroned princess must… (Then tell us what she must do)
Then you should tell us why the ‘criminal’ is special. What skills does he have that will help the dethroned princess.
Hope this helps, good luck with this!
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You switch protagonist halfway through your logline. You begin from a the point of view of the meat eating christian then the logline switches to the prospective of the straight edge punk rocker. You shouldn't change the point of view in a logline because it will confuse the reader.
You switch protagonist halfway through your logline. You begin from a the point of view of the meat eating christian then the logline switches to the prospective of the straight edge punk rocker. You shouldn’t change the point of view in a logline because it will confuse the reader.
See lessIn ancient Egypt, when a cruel god seizes the throne plunging the nation into chaos, a mortal rebel must team up with a beneficent god to defeat him.
"When the malicious god Set seizes the throne of Egypt by killing his father Osiris, The blinded falcon God Horus must team with an industrious mortal thief to steal back his eye and retake the throne."
“When the malicious god Set seizes the throne of Egypt by killing his father Osiris, The blinded falcon God Horus must team with an industrious mortal thief to steal back his eye and retake the throne.”
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