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  1. Posted: September 25, 2015In: Drama

    Is the teacher of the Presidents youngest son part of a plot to rig the coming election, or is her love of him, real?

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    Added an answer on September 26, 2015 at 2:42 am

    From this logline I have no Idea who's the lead character. Is it the teacher? Is it the Presidents? Is it the President son? Is it the person who investigates the teacher? I don't know, and the reader should know who the lead character is after reading a logline.Also you should leave questions out oRead more

    From this logline I have no Idea who’s the lead character. Is it the teacher? Is it the Presidents? Is it the President son? Is it the person who investigates the teacher? I don’t know, and the reader should know who the lead character is after reading a logline.

    Also you should leave questions out of loglines, instead focus on the lead character and what they want. A basic rule of thumb would be, if it sounds like it’s from an episode of batman, (Will the caped crusader escape from the clutches of the Joker? Tune in same bat time same bat station and find out) then it probably shouldn’t be in a logline.
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  2. Posted: September 25, 2015In: Adventure

    A secret government test places 3 children that have been raised with no human contact on a deserted island to see how they develop.

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    Added an answer on September 26, 2015 at 2:35 am

    This is more of a situation than a story. A story has a lead character who wants something (A goal) and someone or something that stands in the way of achieving that goal.

    This is more of a situation than a story. A story has a lead character who wants something (A goal) and someone or something that stands in the way of achieving that goal.

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  3. Posted: September 26, 2015In: War

    Adapted from the book The Last Stand of Fox Company about a real battle over six nights in subfreezing temperatures during the Korean War: A brainy captain and 250 inexperienced Marines defend a vital evacuation route against an invading horde of Chinese soldiers to save another 8,000 Marines from annihilation.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 26, 2015 at 2:33 am

    The Title "Chosen" would work for this story

    The Title “Chosen” would work for this story

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