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A retired father and his daughter must forgive previous tensions to work together to prevent his other daughters from selling the family business.
"When his eldest daughter puts his beloved family bar on the market, a retired barkeep reluctantly seeks the help of his estranged youngest daughter, who's the only lawyer he can afford."
“When his eldest daughter puts his beloved family bar on the market, a retired barkeep reluctantly seeks the help of his estranged youngest daughter, who’s the only lawyer he can afford.”
See lessA retired father and his daughter must forgive previous tensions to work together to prevent his other daughters from selling the family business.
You should put the inciting incident first "When his eldest daughter puts his beloved family bar on the market, a retired barkeep seeks the help of his estranged youngest daughter to convince her sibling not to sell."
You should put the inciting incident first
“When his eldest daughter puts his beloved family bar on the market, a retired barkeep seeks the help of his estranged youngest daughter to convince her sibling not to sell.”
See less?When a rookie undercover officer mistakenly finds himself admitted to a college that trains criminals, he will have to play a balancing act in order to please his superiors and prove he's one of the guys.?
The line "He will have to play a balancing act" doesn't really tell us anything and should be dropped. When a rookie undercover officer mistakenly finds himself admitted to a college that trains criminals, he will have to prove he's one of the guys.? -possibly add- (If he's to discover the masterminRead more
The line “He will have to play a balancing act” doesn’t really tell us anything and should be dropped.
When a rookie undercover officer mistakenly finds himself admitted to a college that trains criminals, he will have to prove he’s one of the guys.? -possibly add- (If he’s to discover the mastermind behind the school)
Hope that helps, good luck with this!
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