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When women are refused jobs at the city's largest company, a group of women must overcome backward attitudes, language barriers, poverty and tradition to ignite a community battle from the factory gates to the highest courts, for equality.
Instead of a 'group' of women you should have a specific woman lead the charge.
Instead of a ‘group’ of women you should have a specific woman lead the charge.
See lessAn insecure man whose soul communicates with other souls in the spiritual realm of dreams, will need to overcome his fears in order to find and bring back his sister?s soul whose body lies in a coma.
I like the ticking time clock. Nir; the lead has to save his sister before she's taken off life support.
I like the ticking time clock. Nir; the lead has to save his sister before she’s taken off life support.
See lessWhen Bruce Lee loses his powers to Dr. Doom, he teams up with the Avengers to ?cross swords? with his nemesis – in an all evil parallel universe – and retake his might.
1) Bruce lee didn't have powers, he had skills. I don't know how you would take someones skills away. 2) Bruce Lee was a real person, the Avengers are fictional characters. Just saying it's a parallel universe doesn't mean the reader will suspend disbelief. 3) Bruce Lee's redemption: The title is coRead more
1) Bruce lee didn’t have powers, he had skills. I don’t know how you would take someones skills away.
2) Bruce Lee was a real person, the Avengers are fictional characters. Just saying it’s a parallel universe doesn’t mean the reader will suspend disbelief.
3) Bruce Lee’s redemption: The title is confusing, nothing in the logline suggests Bruce Lee needs redemption.
4) I agree with karenfoley. If this is a real project it won’t work because you would need the rights to make the movie… (and if it is a practice logline it needs some work.)
Anyway, I hope those critiques helped, hope to see more of your loglines.
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