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An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried
Good re-write Rutger: One change. You wrote: retired psychopath shrink (A retired shrink who used to treat psychopaths) Suggestion: psychopathic retired shrink. (A psychopath who was once a shrink)
Good re-write Rutger: One change.
You wrote: retired psychopath shrink (A retired shrink who used to treat psychopaths)
Suggestion: psychopathic retired shrink. (A psychopath who was once a shrink)
See lessAn estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried
Solid re-write, I like it.
Solid re-write, I like it.
See lessAn estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried
Estranged couple decides for a hiking therapy where a masked psychopath with a killer dog captures them. --(As written it sounds like being captured by a masked psychopath was part of the therapy) with a killer dog (I don't think you need the dog in the logline) They are now forced to confront eachRead more
Estranged couple decides for a hiking therapy where a masked psychopath with a killer dog captures them. –(As written it sounds like being captured by a masked psychopath was part of the therapy)
with a killer dog (I don’t think you need the dog in the logline)
They are now forced to confront each other to survive. (I agree with DPG they are captured by a psychopath and they confront each other?)
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“After a bickering couple on a therapeutic hike are captured by psychopath, they must work together if they are to outwit their captor and escape.”
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Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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