Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
With most of his Arctic drilling barge crew dead, an up-and-coming oil exec struggles to manage the crisis ?by the book?, but a primordial fungus brought up from under the ice begins to infect the staff of the local hospital turning them into violent sexual predators furiously spreading their spores.
First, I doubt there is a by-the-book response to a primordial fungus which turns humans into raging sex fiends, so that should be dropped from the logline. Second: Struggles is passive. The lead should have to 'Do Something' in order to save the day (or fail trying) This was my original logline advRead more
First, I doubt there is a by-the-book response to a primordial fungus which turns humans into raging sex fiends, so that should be dropped from the logline.
Second: Struggles is passive. The lead should have to ‘Do Something’ in order to save the day (or fail trying)
This was my original logline advice the last time you posted it:
—–
When a primordial fungus infects his crew turning then into raging sex fiends, an up-and-coming Alaskan oil exec is forced to work with his scientist ex-wife to find a cure because at forty below zero, escape is not an option.?
—–
While you don’t have to use it. Hopefully you see what I did, the lead needs to do something (In fact do the last thing he really wants to do) work with is ex-wife to find a cure.
Your logline will be different but you should tell us what the lead needs to DO in order to either A: find a cure or B: escape.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessTwo cultures live side-by-side with little to do with each other until the sins of a white man force the laws of his unknown heritage.
This logline is way to vague, I'm not sure who's the lead character, I have no idea what's his or her goal, I don't know who or what is standing in the leads way, or even what culture or time period this story takes place. Add these elements to the logline and it will improve. Hope that helped, goodRead more
This logline is way to vague, I’m not sure who’s the lead character, I have no idea what’s his or her goal, I don’t know who or what is standing in the leads way, or even what culture or time period this story takes place.
Add these elements to the logline and it will improve.
Hope that helped, good luck this this!
See lessTwo cultures live side-by-side with little to do with each other until the sins of a white man force the laws of his unknown heritage.
This logline is way to vague, I'm not sure who's the lead character, I have no idea what's his or her goal, I don't know who or what is standing in the leads way, or even what culture or time period this story takes place. Add these elements to the logline and it will improve. Hope that helped, goodRead more
This logline is way to vague, I’m not sure who’s the lead character, I have no idea what’s his or her goal, I don’t know who or what is standing in the leads way, or even what culture or time period this story takes place.
Add these elements to the logline and it will improve.
Hope that helped, good luck this this!
See less