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Fed up with stiff regulations preventing people from getting the organs they need, Dr. Andrea Sellers dives into the seedy world of the underground organ trade. (1 hour cable drama)
"When his child needs a life saving heart transplant, a desperate father dives into the seedy world of the underground organ trade to save his daughter."
“When his child needs a life saving heart transplant, a desperate father dives into the seedy world of the underground organ trade to save his daughter.”
See lessA lazy but gifted high-school kid blackmails his adulterous parents and uses the money to start his own business, in an attempt to woo the girl of his dreams.
I get your point about die hard, however there is a connection between the inciting incident and the main characters goal. Die Hard: Inciting incident: Wife's sky-rise is captured by terrorists. Goal: stop the bad guys and save his wife, Your logline inciting incident: ----- Goal: Woo girl You havenRead more
I get your point about die hard, however there is a connection between the inciting incident and the main characters goal.
Die Hard:
Inciting incident: Wife’s sky-rise is captured by terrorists.
Goal: stop the bad guys and save his wife,
Your logline
inciting incident: —–
Goal: Woo girl
You haven’t given us any connection or incite in the logline as to how starting a business and wooing a girl connects to one another.
If you told us she was greedy or if she only dated rich guys that might help. If she wanted to be a model and he used the money to found his own modeling agency then we could see the connection.
See lessA lazy but gifted high-school kid blackmails his adulterous parents and uses the money to start his own business, in an attempt to woo the girl of his dreams.
I get your point about die hard, however there is a connection between the inciting incident and the main characters goal. Die Hard: Inciting incident: Wife's sky-rise is captured by terrorists. Goal: stop the bad guys and save his wife, Your logline inciting incident: ----- Goal: Woo girl You havenRead more
I get your point about die hard, however there is a connection between the inciting incident and the main characters goal.
Die Hard:
Inciting incident: Wife’s sky-rise is captured by terrorists.
Goal: stop the bad guys and save his wife,
Your logline
inciting incident: —–
Goal: Woo girl
You haven’t given us any connection or incite in the logline as to how starting a business and wooing a girl connects to one another.
If you told us she was greedy or if she only dated rich guys that might help. If she wanted to be a model and he used the money to found his own modeling agency then we could see the connection.
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