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When an ancient spell book activates a cursed family heirloom, a part-time occult librarian teams up with an undead ex-cop to destroy a voodoo witchdoctor stealing souls to live forever.
Your logline starts off 'when and ancient spell book activates a family heirloom' So I am thinking something like 'Todd and the book of pure evil' Then later in the logline you switch to a witch doctor trying to steal souls. That seems confusing, as a result I would just stick with the witch doctor;Read more
Your logline starts off ‘when and ancient spell book activates a family heirloom’
So I am thinking something like ‘Todd and the book of pure evil’
Then later in the logline you switch to a witch doctor trying to steal souls.
That seems confusing, as a result I would just stick with the witch doctor; ‘when a witch doctor activates a family heirloom’
See lessA young candle maker with hidden magic powers teams up with an aloof dragon knight to battle monsters in a dark realm while seeking to rescue her twin brother before a sinister sorcerer uses him to activate an ancient weapon.
Well to me her obvious character flow would be 'she's afraid of the dark' which is why she became a candle maker. Now she must do the last thing she would ever want to do. Enter the dark realm. But that's just my take, not sure where the OP was heading with this.
Well to me her obvious character flow would be ‘she’s afraid of the dark’ which is why she became a candle maker. Now she must do the last thing she would ever want to do. Enter the dark realm.
But that’s just my take, not sure where the OP was heading with this.
See lessA young candle maker with hidden magic powers teams up with an aloof dragon knight to battle monsters in a dark realm while seeking to rescue her twin brother before a sinister sorcerer uses him to activate an ancient weapon.
Well to me her obvious character flow would be 'she's afraid of the dark' which is why she became a candle maker. Now she must do the last thing she would ever want to do. Enter the dark realm. But that's just my take, not sure where the OP was heading with this.
Well to me her obvious character flow would be ‘she’s afraid of the dark’ which is why she became a candle maker. Now she must do the last thing she would ever want to do. Enter the dark realm.
But that’s just my take, not sure where the OP was heading with this.
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