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An alcoholic former ship captain must slay his own demons as he reassembles his ragtag crew to embark on one last mission: rescue his long-thought-dead pilot and unite him with the daughter he never knew he had.
On the contrary, the point is, you have added too much to the logline to the point the logline has lost it's focus. P.S. As for Slaying demons, slaying metaphorical demons will not get people to read your script, you should really drop that from the logine (Not the script, solid character developmenRead more
On the contrary, the point is, you have added too much to the logline to the point the logline has lost it’s focus.
P.S. As for Slaying demons, slaying metaphorical demons will not get people to read your script, you should really drop that from the logine (Not the script, solid character development)
See lessAn alcoholic former ship captain must slay his own demons as he reassembles his ragtag crew to embark on one last mission: rescue his long-thought-dead pilot and unite him with the daughter he never knew he had.
On the contrary, the point is, you have added too much to the logline to the point the logline has lost it's focus. P.S. As for Slaying demons, slaying metaphorical demons will not get people to read your script, you should really drop that from the logine (Not the script, solid character developmenRead more
On the contrary, the point is, you have added too much to the logline to the point the logline has lost it’s focus.
P.S. As for Slaying demons, slaying metaphorical demons will not get people to read your script, you should really drop that from the logine (Not the script, solid character development)
See lessAn alcoholic former ship captain must slay his own demons as he reassembles his ragtag crew to embark on one last mission: rescue his long-thought-dead pilot and unite him with the daughter he never knew he had.
Good point Nir, it would also help if it was explained why rescuing the pilot is so important, was the long lost pilot, a best friend, a father, brother or someone close in some way to the lead character. ----- "When he discovers his best friend, a pilot lost at sea, might still be alive; an alcoholRead more
Good point Nir, it would also help if it was explained why rescuing the pilot is so important, was the long lost pilot, a best friend, a father, brother or someone close in some way to the lead character.
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“When he discovers his best friend, a pilot lost at sea, might still be alive; an alcoholic former ship captain must do what he promised never to do, go back to sea.”
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