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An alcoholic former ship captain must slay his own demons as he reassembles his ragtag crew to embark on one last mission: rescue his long-thought-dead pilot and unite him with the daughter he never knew he had.
I believe the problem with this logline is you have given your protagonist too many goals (In the logline) 1: He must slay demons 2: He must reassemble his crew 3: He must rescue a pilot thought dead-(no reason or motivations given why that is important) 4: He must reunite with his daughter. I belieRead more
I believe the problem with this logline is you have given your protagonist too many goals (In the logline)
1: He must slay demons
2: He must reassemble his crew
3: He must rescue a pilot thought dead-(no reason or motivations given why that is important)
4: He must reunite with his daughter.
I believe in the logline you should focus on the main goal in order to lower the word count and help make the logline less confusing.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessAn alcoholic former ship captain must slay his own demons as he reassembles his ragtag crew to embark on one last mission: rescue his long-thought-dead pilot and unite him with the daughter he never knew he had.
I believe the problem with this logline is you have given your protagonist too many goals (In the logline) 1: He must slay demons 2: He must reassemble his crew 3: He must rescue a pilot thought dead-(no reason or motivations given why that is important) 4: He must reunite with his daughter. I belieRead more
I believe the problem with this logline is you have given your protagonist too many goals (In the logline)
1: He must slay demons
2: He must reassemble his crew
3: He must rescue a pilot thought dead-(no reason or motivations given why that is important)
4: He must reunite with his daughter.
I believe in the logline you should focus on the main goal in order to lower the word count and help make the logline less confusing.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessA death row inmate is beaten and suffers amnesia, a psychologist works feverishly to prevent his execution.
Quick change: the 'is seeking' was wrong, had to change it to 'seeks' :) Looking to make a name for herself, an arrogant New York lawyers takes the case of a nationally reviled serial killer who, after suffering from amnesia, seeks a stay of execution.?
Quick change: the ‘is seeking’ was wrong, had to change it to ‘seeks’ 🙂
Looking to make a name for herself, an arrogant New York lawyers takes the case of a nationally reviled serial killer who, after suffering from amnesia, seeks a stay of execution.?
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