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A 13 year old little brother had grown up around the lives of crooked cops, gangsters,corrupted politicians, a broken family, and a brother who is hated by them all. Will the little fella help his brother, abandon him, or do absolutely nothing?
?...Will the little fella help his brother, abandon him, or do absolutely nothing?" ----- Help his brother with what? Be more likable to the family? What is the lead character's goal?
?…Will the little fella help his brother, abandon him, or do absolutely nothing?”
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Help his brother with what? Be more likable to the family?
What is the lead character’s goal?
See lessIn a post-apocalyptic world, three young adventurers and somewhat crazy, find that the chickens they?ve been hunted as a food will be part of a dire threat that could destroy what it remains of humanity.
"When his chickens are infected with an extraterrestrial virus, an eccentric farmer must stop the mutated beast before they infect the rest of the world." ----- Here was my thought process: When his chickens are infected with an extraterrestrial virus- inciting incident. an eccentric farmer- lead chRead more
“When his chickens are infected with an extraterrestrial virus, an eccentric farmer must stop the mutated beast before they infect the rest of the world.”
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Here was my thought process:
When his chickens are infected with an extraterrestrial virus- inciting incident.
an eccentric farmer- lead character
must stop the mutated beasts- goal
before they infect the rest of the world- the stakes.
You logline will be different but if you see what I did there you can incorporate your story the same way.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessIn a post-apocalyptic world, three young adventurers and somewhat crazy, find that the chickens they?ve been hunted as a food will be part of a dire threat that could destroy what it remains of humanity.
"When his chickens are infected with an extraterrestrial virus, an eccentric farmer must stop the mutated beast before they infect the rest of the world." ----- Here was my thought process: When his chickens are infected with an extraterrestrial virus- inciting incident. an eccentric farmer- lead chRead more
“When his chickens are infected with an extraterrestrial virus, an eccentric farmer must stop the mutated beast before they infect the rest of the world.”
—–
Here was my thought process:
When his chickens are infected with an extraterrestrial virus- inciting incident.
an eccentric farmer- lead character
must stop the mutated beasts- goal
before they infect the rest of the world- the stakes.
You logline will be different but if you see what I did there you can incorporate your story the same way.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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