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When obsession turns to murder, writer Joe Pittman must find and stop the one responsible for turning his dreams into a nightmare, before his secret can be revealed.
I have no idea what your story's about, because you seem to use a lot of words to say nothing. Specifics will pique the readers interests far more than generalities. Hope that helped, good luck with this!
I have no idea what your story’s about, because you seem to use a lot of words to say nothing.
Specifics will pique the readers interests far more than generalities.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessLove is a luxury few can afford during the Russian Revolution. A luxury that Nadya must decide whether or not to fight for when the object of her fianc?'s lingering infatuation returns. Her identity may shatter more than just their budding relationship.
I am not sure if you have a logline problem or a story problem. A two hour moving about a woman deciding whether or not she should fight for her love doesn't sound compelling. Should I fight, should I not fight, should I fight, should I not fight. On the other hand your logline may not be conveyingRead more
I am not sure if you have a logline problem or a story problem.
A two hour moving about a woman deciding whether or not she should fight for her love doesn’t sound compelling. Should I fight, should I not fight, should I fight, should I not fight.
On the other hand your logline may not be conveying the true essence of the story.
A story about the woman fighting for her love would be far more compelling than a movie about woman trying to deciding whether or not to fight.
Hope that helped.
See lessLove is a luxury few can afford during the Russian Revolution. A luxury that Nadya must decide whether or not to fight for when the object of her fianc?'s lingering infatuation returns. Her identity may shatter more than just their budding relationship.
I am not sure if you have a logline problem or a story problem. A two hour moving about a woman deciding whether or not she should fight for her love doesn't sound compelling. Should I fight, should I not fight, should I fight, should I not fight. On the other hand your logline may not be conveyingRead more
I am not sure if you have a logline problem or a story problem.
A two hour moving about a woman deciding whether or not she should fight for her love doesn’t sound compelling. Should I fight, should I not fight, should I fight, should I not fight.
On the other hand your logline may not be conveying the true essence of the story.
A story about the woman fighting for her love would be far more compelling than a movie about woman trying to deciding whether or not to fight.
Hope that helped.
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