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  1. Posted: November 14, 2014In: Public

    A young and independent woman struggles to determine if she has made the right choice in marrying her husband when her irresistible and impulsive ex-boyfriend tries to win her back while she is on her honeymoon.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 15, 2014 at 8:03 am

    Even though I can see where you are going, "Struggles to determine if she's made the right choice" isn't a very compelling goal. ----- When her charming ex shows disrupts her honeymoon determined to win her back, a confused bride is forced to choose between the good man she married and the reformedRead more

    Even though I can see where you are going, “Struggles to determine if she’s made the right choice” isn’t a very compelling goal.
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    When her charming ex shows disrupts her honeymoon determined to win her back, a confused bride is forced to choose between the good man she married and the reformed scoundrel who shattered her heart.
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    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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  2. Posted: November 13, 2014In: Public

    A ruthlessly ambitious farmboy connives his way to the top of the Oklahoma oil business during its early boom days. In the end, after years of backstabbing and dirty dealings, he must fight the enemies earned over a lifetime to hang on to his empire.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 14, 2014 at 8:32 am

    I usually helps if a lead character has a goal. Hanging on is a goal but not a very pro-active one, is there another goal you could use in your logilne for the lead character?

    I usually helps if a lead character has a goal. Hanging on is a goal but not a very pro-active one, is there another goal you could use in your logilne for the lead character?

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  3. Posted: November 13, 2014In: Public

    A ruthlessly ambitious farmboy connives his way to the top of the Oklahoma oil business during its early boom days. In the end, after years of backstabbing and dirty dealings, he must fight the enemies earned over a lifetime to hang on to his empire.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 14, 2014 at 8:32 am

    I usually helps if a lead character has a goal. Hanging on is a goal but not a very pro-active one, is there another goal you could use in your logilne for the lead character?

    I usually helps if a lead character has a goal. Hanging on is a goal but not a very pro-active one, is there another goal you could use in your logilne for the lead character?

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