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Escaping from a crashed prison plane with a murderer, a trusting lawyer wrongfully arrested for fraud, must evade him while she eliminates the vicious, money-hungry husband who framed her, before she can prove her innocence to a pursuing misogynistic FBI agent.
I think that is a solid loglne example gil. I like the use of "On the lam"
I think that is a solid loglne example gil. I like the use of “On the lam”
See lessEscaping from a crashed prison plane with a murderer, a trusting lawyer wrongfully arrested for fraud, must evade him while she eliminates the vicious, money-hungry husband who framed her, before she can prove her innocence to a pursuing misogynistic FBI agent.
There sure are a lot of bad guys in this logline. That's probably why it 's too long. However this's a good concept. The previous critique, they probably wouldn't be transporting a prisoner before the trial was valid. (I believe from a previous attempt at your logline) How about this: ----- "After hRead more
There sure are a lot of bad guys in this logline. That’s probably why it ‘s too long. However this’s a good concept.
The previous critique, they probably wouldn’t be transporting a prisoner before the trial was valid. (I believe from a previous attempt at your logline)
How about this:
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“After her prison plane crashes, a wrongly convicted fugitive must evade a misogynistic FBI agent and an escaped serial rapist while she hunts for clues that’ll prove her innocence.” -29 words-
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Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessEscaping from a crashed prison plane with a murderer, a trusting lawyer wrongfully arrested for fraud, must evade him while she eliminates the vicious, money-hungry husband who framed her, before she can prove her innocence to a pursuing misogynistic FBI agent.
There sure are a lot of bad guys in this logline. That's probably why it 's too long. However this's a good concept. The previous critique, they probably wouldn't be transporting a prisoner before the trial was valid. (I believe from a previous attempt at your logline) How about this: ----- "After hRead more
There sure are a lot of bad guys in this logline. That’s probably why it ‘s too long. However this’s a good concept.
The previous critique, they probably wouldn’t be transporting a prisoner before the trial was valid. (I believe from a previous attempt at your logline)
How about this:
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“After her prison plane crashes, a wrongly convicted fugitive must evade a misogynistic FBI agent and an escaped serial rapist while she hunts for clues that’ll prove her innocence.” -29 words-
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Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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