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  1. Posted: November 2, 2014In: Public

    In the final moments before facing the firing squad, the charismatic leader of a murderous robbery gang makes one last request: to have her confession heard by the priest who was once her lover.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 6, 2014 at 3:46 pm

    "...I have absolutely no problem sticking to my guns all day long." Which begs the question, why ask for advice if you don't want advice? Just curious?

    “…I have absolutely no problem sticking to my guns all day long.”

    Which begs the question, why ask for advice if you don’t want advice?

    Just curious?

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  2. Posted: November 2, 2014In: Public

    In the final moments before facing the firing squad, the charismatic leader of a murderous robbery gang makes one last request: to have her confession heard by the priest who was once her lover.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 5, 2014 at 1:52 pm

    Here is your new attempt: As you wrote it. A notorious armed robbery gang is about to be executed by firing squad. When the devout priest offering last rites and confession discovers that the gang?s charismatic leader is his former high school sweetheart he fights to save her soul even though she haRead more

    Here is your new attempt: As you wrote it.

    A notorious armed robbery gang is about to be executed by firing squad. When the devout priest offering last rites and confession discovers that the gang?s charismatic leader is his former high school sweetheart he fights to save her soul even though she hates him.?

    However I think you buried the lead: Here is the same logline without the first sentence.

    “When a devout priest offering last rites and confession discovers the gang?s charismatic leader is his high school sweetheart, he fights to save her soul even though she hates him.?

    Hope that helped

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  3. Posted: November 2, 2014In: Public

    In the final moments before facing the firing squad, the charismatic leader of a murderous robbery gang makes one last request: to have her confession heard by the priest who was once her lover.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 5, 2014 at 1:52 pm

    Here is your new attempt: As you wrote it. A notorious armed robbery gang is about to be executed by firing squad. When the devout priest offering last rites and confession discovers that the gang?s charismatic leader is his former high school sweetheart he fights to save her soul even though she haRead more

    Here is your new attempt: As you wrote it.

    A notorious armed robbery gang is about to be executed by firing squad. When the devout priest offering last rites and confession discovers that the gang?s charismatic leader is his former high school sweetheart he fights to save her soul even though she hates him.?

    However I think you buried the lead: Here is the same logline without the first sentence.

    “When a devout priest offering last rites and confession discovers the gang?s charismatic leader is his high school sweetheart, he fights to save her soul even though she hates him.?

    Hope that helped

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