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In the final moments before facing the firing squad, the charismatic leader of a murderous robbery gang makes one last request: to have her confession heard by the priest who was once her lover.
You should focus on the lead character in the logline, the priest or the leader of the gang. (Can't tell from the logline who's the lead character)
You should focus on the lead character in the logline, the priest or the leader of the gang. (Can’t tell from the logline who’s the lead character)
See lessAgainst opposition from her family, and his mentor, a graduate from Mongolia and her Russian pen-pal, who are otherwise too poor to go away to school, road-test their courage and their friendship by joining other students and staff to launch their new floating campus aboard the Rainbow Warriors International University
That is much better, but you should give us the 'why'. After "This happens" A girl from Mongolia and her pen-pal, a boy from Russia, face down all obstacles to their chance to go to an international college aboard a ship Hope that helps.
That is much better, but you should give us the ‘why’.
After “This happens” A girl from Mongolia and her pen-pal, a boy from Russia, face down all obstacles to their chance to go to an international college aboard a ship
Hope that helps.
See lessAgainst opposition from her family, and his mentor, a graduate from Mongolia and her Russian pen-pal, who are otherwise too poor to go away to school, road-test their courage and their friendship by joining other students and staff to launch their new floating campus aboard the Rainbow Warriors International University
That is much better, but you should give us the 'why'. After "This happens" A girl from Mongolia and her pen-pal, a boy from Russia, face down all obstacles to their chance to go to an international college aboard a ship Hope that helps.
That is much better, but you should give us the ‘why’.
After “This happens” A girl from Mongolia and her pen-pal, a boy from Russia, face down all obstacles to their chance to go to an international college aboard a ship
Hope that helps.
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