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Will these teenagers? unruly habits kill them? Or will it do enough damage to make them wish it did?
Who is the main character? What do they want? Who or what is standing in the way?
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A female college student must defeat a secret fraternity of bodysnatchers, who need her body to host their ancient founder for world domination.
The inciting incident seems disconnected with the story of the fraternity. You don't have to drop the fathers death from the script but you should drop it from the logline since it doesn't relate to the second part of the logline. Second. Women usually join Sororities and men join fraternities. Is tRead more
The inciting incident seems disconnected with the story of the fraternity. You don’t have to drop the fathers death from the script but you should drop it from the logline since it doesn’t relate to the second part of the logline.
Second. Women usually join Sororities and men join fraternities. Is there a reason she is joining a fraternity?
Hope that helped, good luck with this
See lessA female college student must defeat a secret fraternity of bodysnatchers, who need her body to host their ancient founder for world domination.
The inciting incident seems disconnected with the story of the fraternity. You don't have to drop the fathers death from the script but you should drop it from the logline since it doesn't relate to the second part of the logline. Second. Women usually join Sororities and men join fraternities. Is tRead more
The inciting incident seems disconnected with the story of the fraternity. You don’t have to drop the fathers death from the script but you should drop it from the logline since it doesn’t relate to the second part of the logline.
Second. Women usually join Sororities and men join fraternities. Is there a reason she is joining a fraternity?
Hope that helped, good luck with this
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