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After hospital negligence leaves her son profoundly brain-injured, a mother consumed by anger risks alienating him as she struggles to let go of the boy he might have been and accept the boy he has become.
Nothing wrong with that but if the logline went that way, the beginning (The part about the negligence and consumed with anger) should be changed.
Nothing wrong with that but if the logline went that way, the beginning (The part about the negligence and consumed with anger) should be changed.
See lessAfter hospital negligence leaves her son profoundly brain-injured, a mother consumed by anger risks alienating him as she struggles to let go of the boy he might have been and accept the boy he has become.
The first part of the logline is good: "After hospital negligence leaves her son profoundly brain-injured, a mother consumed by anger..." As for the second part, I believe you went the wrong way. I think the logline should focus on the fight to make those responsible pay instead of the more subjectiRead more
The first part of the logline is good: “After hospital negligence leaves her son profoundly brain-injured, a mother consumed by anger…”
As for the second part, I believe you went the wrong way. I think the logline should focus on the fight to make those responsible pay instead of the more subjective “Letting go”
Anyway, I believe this is a great idea for a screenplay, good luck! Hope that helped.
See lessAfter hospital negligence leaves her son profoundly brain-injured, a mother consumed by anger risks alienating him as she struggles to let go of the boy he might have been and accept the boy he has become.
The first part of the logline is good: "After hospital negligence leaves her son profoundly brain-injured, a mother consumed by anger..." As for the second part, I believe you went the wrong way. I think the logline should focus on the fight to make those responsible pay instead of the more subjectiRead more
The first part of the logline is good: “After hospital negligence leaves her son profoundly brain-injured, a mother consumed by anger…”
As for the second part, I believe you went the wrong way. I think the logline should focus on the fight to make those responsible pay instead of the more subjective “Letting go”
Anyway, I believe this is a great idea for a screenplay, good luck! Hope that helped.
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