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When an out of work teacher is given a deadline by a loan shark, he contracts a hit-man on himself so his family can collect on his life insurance. However after he befriends the hit-man they decide to fake his death instead.
You shouldn't give away the ending in the logline.
You shouldn’t give away the ending in the logline.
See lessWhen an out of work teacher is given a deadline by a loan shark, he contracts a hit-man on himself so his family can collect on his life insurance. However after he befriends the hit-man they decide to fake his death instead.
One thing I might point out, this logline would benefit from a specific deadline. You say, after he is given a deadline.There's no good reason not to say what that deadline is; and it will help your logline. Example: ------ After he's given three days to repay 100k to a loan shark, an out of work teRead more
One thing I might point out, this logline would benefit from a specific deadline.
You say, after he is given a deadline.There’s no good reason not to say what that deadline is; and it will help your logline.
Example:
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After he’s given three days to repay 100k to a loan shark, an out of work teacher hires a hitman to take him out, so his family can inherit the life insurance.
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hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessWhen an out of work teacher is given a deadline by a loan shark, he contracts a hit-man on himself so his family can collect on his life insurance. However after he befriends the hit-man they decide to fake his death instead.
One thing I might point out, this logline would benefit from a specific deadline. You say, after he is given a deadline.There's no good reason not to say what that deadline is; and it will help your logline. Example: ------ After he's given three days to repay 100k to a loan shark, an out of work teRead more
One thing I might point out, this logline would benefit from a specific deadline.
You say, after he is given a deadline.There’s no good reason not to say what that deadline is; and it will help your logline.
Example:
——
After he’s given three days to repay 100k to a loan shark, an out of work teacher hires a hitman to take him out, so his family can inherit the life insurance.
—–
hope that helped, good luck with this!
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