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As a fascist state that controls the GMO tech that feeds the population seeks to secure its hold on power, the poorer farmers and climate refugees in the south embark on a secret mission to get back natural seeds from a heavily fortified island.
Great point. Instead of a fascist state, put a face to it. A specific Hitler or Mussolini, instead of a generic, "evil government." If this leader is personally responsible for doing something bad to the lead character, such as ordering the death of a brother, mother, father, best friend... maybe beRead more
Great point. Instead of a fascist state, put a face to it. A specific Hitler or Mussolini, instead of a generic, “evil government.”
If this leader is personally responsible for doing something bad to the lead character, such as ordering the death of a brother, mother, father, best friend… maybe because they were protesting, then the story becomes personal.
See lessAs a fascist state that controls the GMO tech that feeds the population seeks to secure its hold on power, the poorer farmers and climate refugees in the south embark on a secret mission to get back natural seeds from a heavily fortified island.
Great point. Instead of a fascist state, put a face to it. A specific Hitler or Mussolini, instead of a generic, "evil government." If this leader is personally responsible for doing something bad to the lead character, such as ordering the death of a brother, mother, father, best friend... maybe beRead more
Great point. Instead of a fascist state, put a face to it. A specific Hitler or Mussolini, instead of a generic, “evil government.”
If this leader is personally responsible for doing something bad to the lead character, such as ordering the death of a brother, mother, father, best friend… maybe because they were protesting, then the story becomes personal.
See lessWhen an out of work teacher is given a deadline by a loan shark, he contracts a hit-man on himself so his family can collect on his life insurance. However after he befriends the hit-man they decide to fake his death instead.
If that's the case, don't give away the ending in the logline.
If that’s the case, don’t give away the ending in the logline.
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