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A terminally ill ex-con seeks revenge on the partner who double-crossed him and killed his girlfriend.
That's true. I should probably just used, On death's door. A person who is Terminally ill could have a year or more to live. A person who is on death's door, might not make it till tomorrow.
That’s true. I should probably just used, On death’s door.
A person who is Terminally ill could have a year or more to live. A person who is on death’s door, might not make it till tomorrow.
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I can't find fault with this logline but I am not captivated. Maybe give it ticking clock, such as a week left to live instead of just saying "Terminally ill". How about this: ----- "On deaths door, a terminally ill ex-con seeks revenge on his former best friend and partner who double-crossed him anRead more
I can’t find fault with this logline but I am not captivated. Maybe give it ticking clock, such as a week left to live instead of just saying “Terminally ill”.
How about this:
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“On deaths door, a terminally ill ex-con seeks revenge on his former best friend and partner who double-crossed him and killed his pregnant fiance.”
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Just trying to up the stakes a bit. In the end there isn’t anything wrong with your logline.
See lessA terminally ill ex-con seeks revenge on the partner who double-crossed him and killed his girlfriend.
I can't find fault with this logline but I am not captivated. Maybe give it ticking clock, such as a week left to live instead of just saying "Terminally ill". How about this: ----- "On deaths door, a terminally ill ex-con seeks revenge on his former best friend and partner who double-crossed him anRead more
I can’t find fault with this logline but I am not captivated. Maybe give it ticking clock, such as a week left to live instead of just saying “Terminally ill”.
How about this:
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“On deaths door, a terminally ill ex-con seeks revenge on his former best friend and partner who double-crossed him and killed his pregnant fiance.”
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Just trying to up the stakes a bit. In the end there isn’t anything wrong with your logline.
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