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  1. Posted: July 24, 2014In: Public

    When two people who admire each other from afar cross paths, they let the opportunity of a lifetime to meet pass them by.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on July 25, 2014 at 5:14 am

    Since this is a two minute short, I am going to try a non-traditional logline. How about this? ----- "When two strangers gaze from afar, they enter a conversation of mutual attraction; no words spoken but their meaning clear." ----- Hope that helped, good luck with this!

    Since this is a two minute short, I am going to try a non-traditional logline. How about this?
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    “When two strangers gaze from afar, they enter a conversation of mutual attraction; no words spoken but their meaning clear.”
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    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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  2. Posted: July 24, 2014In: Public

    After finding fame with a stolen screenplay of a recently deceased unsigned screenwriter a movie studio’s script reader turns to murdering his backlog of budding screenwriters for their movie ideas.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on July 25, 2014 at 4:50 am

    I believe what's muddying the logline up is this phrase. "...turns to murdering his backlog of budding screenwriters" if you wrote that a different way it might help. Other than that, I think it is an interesting idea.

    I believe what’s muddying the logline up is this phrase.

    “…turns to murdering his backlog of budding screenwriters”

    if you wrote that a different way it might help.

    Other than that, I think it is an interesting idea.

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  3. Posted: July 24, 2014In: Public

    After finding fame with a stolen screenplay of a recently deceased unsigned screenwriter a movie studio’s script reader turns to murdering his backlog of budding screenwriters for their movie ideas.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on July 25, 2014 at 4:50 am

    I believe what's muddying the logline up is this phrase. "...turns to murdering his backlog of budding screenwriters" if you wrote that a different way it might help. Other than that, I think it is an interesting idea.

    I believe what’s muddying the logline up is this phrase.

    “…turns to murdering his backlog of budding screenwriters”

    if you wrote that a different way it might help.

    Other than that, I think it is an interesting idea.

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