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When a hard-partying rockstar is kicked out of his band due to a drug addiction, he starts giving guitar lessons to fund his habit.
At the moment this is a situation not a story. A story would occur when he has a goal and something stands in his way.
At the moment this is a situation not a story. A story would occur when he has a goal and something stands in his way.
See lessIn A Small Town is a gritty thriller following the trials and tribulations of a small town cop who has a near death event accompanied with the realization his hometown is not what it seems.
You should be more specific, tell us what the event was... "After a near fatal car crash," for instance ----- Also, "Trials and tribulations" is vague and should be dropped. ----- The line "the realization his hometown is not what it seems" gives too much away. ----- I would start with the basics, wRead more
You should be more specific, tell us what the event was… “After a near fatal car crash,” for instance
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Also, “Trials and tribulations” is vague and should be dropped.
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The line “the realization his hometown is not what it seems” gives too much away.
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I would start with the basics, what’s the cops goal or mystery he’s trying to solve and what’s standing in his way?
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessIn A Small Town is a gritty thriller following the trials and tribulations of a small town cop who has a near death event accompanied with the realization his hometown is not what it seems.
You should be more specific, tell us what the event was... "After a near fatal car crash," for instance ----- Also, "Trials and tribulations" is vague and should be dropped. ----- The line "the realization his hometown is not what it seems" gives too much away. ----- I would start with the basics, wRead more
You should be more specific, tell us what the event was… “After a near fatal car crash,” for instance
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Also, “Trials and tribulations” is vague and should be dropped.
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The line “the realization his hometown is not what it seems” gives too much away.
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I would start with the basics, what’s the cops goal or mystery he’s trying to solve and what’s standing in his way?
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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