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An ambitious Ukrainian girl moves to NYC from Brighton beach to escape her conservative family and to fulfill her lifelong dream of becoming a freelance journalist, everything goes better than expected until she discovers that she has less than a year to live…
I would begin the logline with your lead discovering she has a year to live. That's where you're story starts.
I would begin the logline with your lead discovering she has a year to live. That’s where you’re story starts.
See less"To begin a new life and to protect her former identity, an ex-spy must undertake a perilous journey into a land beset with civil war and unearthly disaster"
In order for this logline to work we need to understand how, "To begin a new life and to protect her former identity," relates to "an ex-spy must undertake a perilous journey into a land beset with civil war and unearthly disaster" How does traveling to this land help her begin her new life. Is sheRead more
In order for this logline to work we need to understand how, “To begin a new life and to protect her former identity,” relates to “an ex-spy must undertake a perilous journey into a land beset with civil war and unearthly disaster”
How does traveling to this land help her begin her new life.
Is she going on her own? Did someone send her there? Is someone threatening to expose her identity if she doesn’t go? Is there something she must accomplish when she gets to this land? What land?
Her reason for going, her goal when she get’s there and the stakes if she fails are all good things to add to your logline.
Also, I am not sure what you mean by “unearthly disaster” was the land hit by a meteor?
Anyway hope that helped, good luck with this!
See less"To begin a new life and to protect her former identity, an ex-spy must undertake a perilous journey into a land beset with civil war and unearthly disaster"
In order for this logline to work we need to understand how, "To begin a new life and to protect her former identity," relates to "an ex-spy must undertake a perilous journey into a land beset with civil war and unearthly disaster" How does traveling to this land help her begin her new life. Is sheRead more
In order for this logline to work we need to understand how, “To begin a new life and to protect her former identity,” relates to “an ex-spy must undertake a perilous journey into a land beset with civil war and unearthly disaster”
How does traveling to this land help her begin her new life.
Is she going on her own? Did someone send her there? Is someone threatening to expose her identity if she doesn’t go? Is there something she must accomplish when she gets to this land? What land?
Her reason for going, her goal when she get’s there and the stakes if she fails are all good things to add to your logline.
Also, I am not sure what you mean by “unearthly disaster” was the land hit by a meteor?
Anyway hope that helped, good luck with this!
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