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An ambitious Ukrainian girl moves to NYC from Brighton beach to escape her conservative family and to fulfill her lifelong dream of becoming a freelance journalist, everything goes better than expected until she discovers that she has less than a year to live…
If she is ordinary you don't need to say it. You should narrow it down a little, just say a year. (or six months) You should tell us what she does not what she decides to do. ----- "When a sheltered college student discovers she has a year to live, she moves to NYC to truly live for the first time,Read more
If she is ordinary you don’t need to say it.
You should narrow it down a little, just say a year. (or six months)
You should tell us what she does not what she decides to do.
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“When a sheltered college student discovers she has a year to live, she moves to NYC to truly live for the first time, but must overcome her overbearing mother who is determine to bring her back to Ukraine.”
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I added an antagonist in my version, something standing in her way.
Hope that helped!
See lessAn ambitious Ukrainian girl moves to NYC from Brighton beach to escape her conservative family and to fulfill her lifelong dream of becoming a freelance journalist, everything goes better than expected until she discovers that she has less than a year to live…
If she is ordinary you don't need to say it. You should narrow it down a little, just say a year. (or six months) You should tell us what she does not what she decides to do. ----- "When a sheltered college student discovers she has a year to live, she moves to NYC to truly live for the first time,Read more
If she is ordinary you don’t need to say it.
You should narrow it down a little, just say a year. (or six months)
You should tell us what she does not what she decides to do.
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“When a sheltered college student discovers she has a year to live, she moves to NYC to truly live for the first time, but must overcome her overbearing mother who is determine to bring her back to Ukraine.”
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I added an antagonist in my version, something standing in her way.
Hope that helped!
See lessAn ambitious Ukrainian girl moves to NYC from Brighton beach to escape her conservative family and to fulfill her lifelong dream of becoming a freelance journalist, everything goes better than expected until she discovers that she has less than a year to live…
I would begin the logline with your lead discovering she has a year to live. That's where you're story starts.
I would begin the logline with your lead discovering she has a year to live. That’s where you’re story starts.
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