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A former group of Navy Seals reunite for 1 more job after the leader of a Colombian Drug Cartel seeks revenge.
I am not thrilled with the line, "1 more job..." You would think if a drug lord is after the team, they would reunite to take him down, not reunite to do one more job. This would be an example: ----- "When a powerful drug lord marks them for death, A former navy seal reunites his team to take down tRead more
I am not thrilled with the line, “1 more job…”
You would think if a drug lord is after the team, they would reunite to take him down, not reunite to do one more job.
This would be an example:
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“When a powerful drug lord marks them for death, A former navy seal reunites his team to take down the drug lord the team believed to have killed ten years before.”
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Of course your logline would differ to reflect the story you are trying to tell.
A high school senior gets inlisted by the CIA to defuse a nuclear bomb set for Washington DC, all before prom.
I think your logline needs to connect the dots a little more. There are people trained to diffuse bombs, that's there job. You should give us a glimpse why the CIA enlisted this kid.
I think your logline needs to connect the dots a little more. There are people trained to diffuse bombs, that’s there job. You should give us a glimpse why the CIA enlisted this kid.
See lessA high school senior gets inlisted by the CIA to defuse a nuclear bomb set for Washington DC, all before prom.
I think your logline needs to connect the dots a little more. There are people trained to diffuse bombs, that's there job. You should give us a glimpse why the CIA enlisted this kid.
I think your logline needs to connect the dots a little more. There are people trained to diffuse bombs, that’s there job. You should give us a glimpse why the CIA enlisted this kid.
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