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  1. Posted: April 28, 2019In: Action

    A CSIS agent returns to duty to stop an eco-terrorist leader who’s missing his original face, and his followers who are in possession of the American government’s plans for the next 81 years.

    Robb Ross Samurai
    Added an answer on April 29, 2019 at 2:39 am

    Clarify if this takes place in Canada or the US.Explaining why he has to return- why can't another agent work the case?- will help flesh him out. Though is that the extent of the irony? Doesn't seem like a big deal for an agent to do what he used to do.What are the stakes, the terrorist's plan?MissiRead more

    Clarify if this takes place in Canada or the US.

    Explaining why he has to return- why can’t another agent work the case?- will help flesh him out. Though is that the extent of the irony? Doesn’t seem like a big deal for an agent to do what he used to do.

    What are the stakes, the terrorist’s plan?

    Missing his face is a detail for the script, unless it’s clarified in the logline to be more signifcant.

    Even with suspension of disbelief, the 81 years part is a turn-off because there’s no sense or relatability to it. Is there something more specific to this that got lost in translation? A plan for a few months from now?

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  2. Posted: April 25, 2019In: Thriller

    In 1961, a British double agent, living under a new alias, must thwart a corrupt former colleague who threatens to expose his existence to a secret organisation of Nazis, unless he takes part in his complex game of human chess.

    Robb Ross Samurai
    Added an answer on April 28, 2019 at 12:37 pm

    Is a Nazi really the protag?

    Is a Nazi really the protag?

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  3. Posted: April 25, 2019In: Crime

    In 1977, a reformed ex-con, desperate to pay for his mother?s hospital bill, returns to his old life of drug dealing but soon learns the game has changed and the players are more ruthless than before.

    Robb Ross Samurai
    Added an answer on April 28, 2019 at 12:35 pm

    Yup. Same with the late 1970s in NY...what would the script portray about the time and place that hasn't been done before?What is one novel aspect of this series?Try a series logline, a pilot logline, and a paragraph with a few words about each key character.Next time, state upfront that it's a seriRead more

    Yup. Same with the late 1970s in NY…what would the script portray about the time and place that hasn’t been done before?

    What is one novel aspect of this series?

    Try a series logline, a pilot logline, and a paragraph with a few words about each key character.

    Next time, state upfront that it’s a series.

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