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  1. Posted: July 17, 2012In: Public

    After a mild-mannered coroner awakens to find he?s become a zombie, not even a decaying body or a band of rogue survivors can deter thoughts of his unfaithful wife: he?s gonna kill that bitch.

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    Added an answer on July 17, 2012 at 1:20 am

    Love me a good zombie concept! It's a bit long, so I think you cut out the middle. "After a mild-mannered coroner awakens to find he?s become a zombie, he can't stop thinking about his unfaithful wife; he?s gonna kill that bitch!" The logline would entice me to read this screenplay- or at least theRead more

    Love me a good zombie concept! It’s a bit long, so I think you cut out the middle.

    “After a mild-mannered coroner awakens to find he?s become a zombie, he can’t stop thinking about his unfaithful wife; he?s gonna kill that bitch!”

    The logline would entice me to read this screenplay- or at least the first ten pages! Good job!

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  2. Posted: May 20, 2012In: Public

    Taking on warring Texas drug cartels, a female Iraq war vet of color, a teenage hunk from the feed store, and a cattle dog, come to the aid of a neighbor who\'s son has been kidnapped.

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    Added an answer on July 16, 2012 at 12:08 am

    Mac- "Does anyone have any theories why there is such a glut of bizarre advice?" I don't think that POV is qualified as "advice" (I certainly don't think so) and I have no idea who actually said it, but it seems to be more one person's skewed viewpoint on a subject they evidentally know very littleRead more

    Mac- “Does anyone have any theories why there is such a glut of bizarre advice?”

    I don’t think that POV is qualified as “advice” (I certainly don’t think so) and I have no idea who actually said it, but it seems to be more one person’s skewed viewpoint on a subject they evidentally know very little about.

    Yet, unfortunately, this thought process is pretty common among newer screenwriters, as it is promulgated through repetition until believed to be true; thus, following the old adage “The blind leading the blind”. I am preparing an article this week in my continued series of “Debunking Screenwriting Myths” and I list a number of such misleading or oft-repeated distortions.

    It kind of reminds me of the now-famous utterance “We need to pass it to know what’s in it.”

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  3. Posted: July 13, 2012In: Public

    When three bungling thieves manage to steal a gold bar, they think all their troubles are over. They were wrong.

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    Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 6:20 am

    Even in it's simplicity and void of any real information, I think it works, strangely enough. One issue I have is how much could a gold bar be worth? $15K? $8K? Doesn't seem enough to slve anyone's "troubles", much less three guys. Has a "Three Stooges" ring to it, too. Gold is such a great topic, aRead more

    Even in it’s simplicity and void of any real information, I think it works, strangely enough. One issue I have is how much could a gold bar be worth? $15K? $8K? Doesn’t seem enough to slve anyone’s “troubles”, much less three guys. Has a “Three Stooges” ring to it, too.

    Gold is such a great topic, and titles are so easy to come up with. The ones you list are good; I immediately though of “Gold Standard”, especially if their “standard” of thievery was so low. “Gold Bar” or “The Gold Bar” works perfectly well.

    Good job. It’s sounds pretty quirky, and quirk works.

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