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An event in a young Indian girl Meena, who now lives in America, triggers memories of her maid Radha, who brought her up into the teens when the family lived in Southern India in the 1980's. The story follows the relationship between Meena and Radha from her childhood to young adulthood in the broader social and hierarchical context built around domestic help in India.
The purpose of the logline is to encourage or entice someone to want to read your screenplay. This makes me want to run from it- fast and furiously (apologies to Eric Holder)! Identify the elements of your logline- your protag (Meena), your antag (none mentioned), her goal (none mentioned), her obstRead more
The purpose of the logline is to encourage or entice someone to want to read your screenplay. This makes me want to run from it- fast and furiously (apologies to Eric Holder)!
Identify the elements of your logline- your protag (Meena), your antag (none mentioned), her goal (none mentioned), her obstacles (social and hierarchical boundaries?), her inner and outer conflicts, the hook and the genre. Review the logline for “The Help” as this seems to be an Indian version of same, and take a lead from that logline.
Good luck! When you post your new logline, it should be improved significantly.
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I would remove "single", remove the comma after "home" and change "which" to "that". Otherwise, it's excellent. One issue I have- you say it's a horror. It's sounds like more of a dark comedy. That could be an isue going forward. Excellent job, and a great concept!
I would remove “single”, remove the comma after “home” and change “which” to “that”. Otherwise, it’s excellent. One issue I have- you say it’s a horror. It’s sounds like more of a dark comedy. That could be an isue going forward.
Excellent job, and a great concept!
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I think this is very good as is! Whomever taught you loglines (me?...jk!) did a good job!
I think this is very good as is! Whomever taught you loglines (me?…jk!) did a good job!
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