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  1. Posted: July 13, 2012In: Public

    After a panic attack, a workaholic is confronted by his long neglected Inner Child who wreaks havoc on the man?s personal and professional life teaching him that family is the most important thing.

    sharkeatingman
    Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 6:00 am

    Love the concept! I know Don Henley's song will be playing over the ending credits (in fact, you should consider calling it "Get Over It!")... A few extraneous words: "After a panic attack, a workaholic is confronted by his "inner child" who begins to wreak havoc on his professional- and personal- lRead more

    Love the concept! I know Don Henley’s song will be playing over the ending credits (in fact, you should consider calling it “Get Over It!”)…

    A few extraneous words: “After a panic attack, a workaholic is confronted by his “inner child” who begins to wreak havoc on his professional- and personal- life!” (23 words).

    Good job!

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  2. Posted: July 13, 2012In: Public

    Diego, a 25 year old Argentinian who has been living illegally for the past 12 years in Luxembourg has 24 hours to leave the country.

    sharkeatingman
    Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 5:56 am

    Why? It's missing the inciting incident.

    Why?

    It’s missing the inciting incident.

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  3. Posted: May 25, 2012In: Public

    After a twisted psychopath is murdered, an evil entity targets the current lineage of those responsible to husk, and kill them to sate his revenge.

    sharkeatingman
    Added an answer on July 12, 2012 at 10:14 am

    Isn't that the whole idea? To stir your imaginings by using words and phrases that are not cliche? "Skinning" has been done; "shucking" is fresh, nasty and just sounds more painful!

    Isn’t that the whole idea? To stir your imaginings by using words and phrases that are not cliche? “Skinning” has been done; “shucking” is fresh, nasty and just sounds more painful!

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