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  1. Posted: July 12, 2012In: Public

    After a meteor has hit a school the government decides to whipe out all the students because of radiation warning. It is up to Kevin and his new found friends to escape before the exterminators can get to them. But will Kevin's side quest to find his little sister come in the way of their survival?

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    Added an answer on July 12, 2012 at 5:18 am

    ERADICATION HIGH- "After a meteor shower, a gang of incorrigible students must find asylum - and one of their siblings - before government exterminators "dispose" of them due to high radiation."

    ERADICATION HIGH- “After a meteor shower, a gang of incorrigible students must find asylum – and one of their siblings – before government exterminators “dispose” of them due to high radiation.”

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  2. Posted: July 12, 2012In: Public

    After remembering fragments of past lives, Nathan hopes to find the family of his past life and track down the person who mudered him. At the same time, Nathan must evade capture by the military.

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    Added an answer on July 12, 2012 at 2:27 am

    Good job, nice concept. Investigating crimes in past lives, "Minority Report" in reverse. "After remembering fragments of past lives, a reincarnate evades the military trying to silence him and tracks down his past-life murderer, trying to bring them to justice." A great title suggestion? "The WindsRead more

    Good job, nice concept. Investigating crimes in past lives, “Minority Report” in reverse.

    “After remembering fragments of past lives, a reincarnate evades the military trying to silence him and tracks down his past-life murderer, trying to bring them to justice.”

    A great title suggestion? “The Windswept” (in my research, this is what they call people we meet along the way in previous lives. It always sounded cool and ominous to me).

    Good luck!

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  3. Posted: July 12, 2012In: Public

    An aging Vietnam Vet haunted by his past puts his war time skills to good use as he seeks revenge on the drug dealer who killed his daughter; along the way he takes out a couple of crooked cop.

    sharkeatingman
    Added an answer on July 12, 2012 at 2:17 am

    Good concept, although it's been somewhat over-done ("Rolling Thunder" comes to mind). You'll need a "hook" that separates it from all of the other sound-alikes. Also, a bit too wordy for a proper logline, IMO: "An aging Vietnam Vet, haunted by his daughter's murder, puts his killing skills to use aRead more

    Good concept, although it’s been somewhat over-done (“Rolling Thunder” comes to mind). You’ll need a “hook” that separates it from all of the other sound-alikes. Also, a bit too wordy for a proper logline, IMO:

    “An aging Vietnam Vet, haunted by his daughter’s murder, puts his killing skills to use as he seeks revenge on murderer and the crooked cops who covered it up.”

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