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A very rich and upright businessman has been diagnosed with a disease that requires an organ transplant. He now considers buying an organ from the black market and is under pressure to cut corners to survive.
I like the possibilities here. I assume the story is not about him 'considering' finding a black market organ, it's about him actually pursuing it (whether or not he does it in the end):A rich, upright businessman is?diagnosed with a life-threatening disease, and must enter the shady and dangerous cRead more
I like the possibilities here. I assume the story is not about him ‘considering’ finding a black market organ, it’s about him actually pursuing it (whether or not he does it in the end):
A rich, upright businessman is?diagnosed with a life-threatening disease, and must enter the shady and dangerous criminal underground to find the black market organ that will save his life.
I don’t think it’s necessary to specify the organ, only in that “black market organ” is a pretty common term, vs. saying something like “black market pancreas”. Or maybe that’s actually fine too.
Is there a specific antagonist? Perhaps someone who wants him dead in order to take over his company, inherit his wealth, or something like that? That would help round out things.
See lessa delusional and conniving narcissist manipulates an introverted millionaire, that’s undergoing a crisis, to room with him and his workaholic best friend to fund his ideas on becoming the next Elon Musk.
as dpg wrote- "When a conniving narcissist manipulates an introverted millionaire to fund his ideas for the next Big Thing in Silicon Valley, he must?"?Fill in the rest of that sentence, and that's a pretty good?logline.There is also the workaholic friend who actually has a genuinely good idea? If sRead more
as dpg wrote- “When a conniving narcissist manipulates an introverted millionaire to fund his ideas for the next Big Thing in Silicon Valley, he must?”?Fill in the rest of that sentence, and that’s a pretty good?logline.
There is also the workaholic friend who actually has a genuinely good idea? If so, that changes the story completely. I’m getting 2 possibilities here:
1. A story about a hustler-type who gets in over his head when he convinces a millionaire to fund his business idea.
See less2. An Odd Couple type story about 3 different guys who come together and must overcome their differences to create the Next Big Thing.
A fired telemarketer fakes the paperwork to become a family physician. When her patients start to see through the lie, she realizes she’s in the perfect position to silence them.
This one got a chuckle out of me (in a good way), because I had just read about a medical practice being shut down for over billing and having totally unqualified personnel performing operations. Who's the protagonist in the story? Or is this like a Talented Mr. Ripley where the story revolves arounRead more
This one got a chuckle out of me (in a good way), because I had just read about a medical practice being shut down for over billing and having totally unqualified personnel performing operations.
Who’s the protagonist in the story? Or is this like a Talented Mr. Ripley where the story revolves around the bad guy?
I really like the premise, but something main story elements are unclear right now.
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