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  1. Posted: September 29, 2015In: Drama

    Down on his luck and fed up with his life in general, a black male is stopped by police in search of a suspect that fits his description.

    steveylang Samurai
    Added an answer on September 29, 2015 at 2:48 am

    When a down-on-his-luck?black male is stopped by police in search of a suspect that fits his description, he...

    When a down-on-his-luck?black male is stopped by police in search of a suspect that fits his description, he…

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  2. Posted: September 28, 2015In: 01, Action

    Seeking revenge for her sexual assault a woman crosses the line into vigilante; she is now hunted by police and the community she believes she protects.

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    Added an answer on September 28, 2015 at 3:01 pm

    I think it is missing some small twist or additional detail that makes it more than just a female version of Death Wish or some other vigilante movie. Also, is the main storyline about her pursuing her assailant, protecting the community from criminals, or both?

    I think it is missing some small twist or additional detail that makes it more than just a female version of Death Wish or some other vigilante movie. Also, is the main storyline about her pursuing her assailant, protecting the community from criminals, or both?

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  3. Posted: September 28, 2015In: Drama

    A corporate burnout turned janitor receives a call from his ex-wife wanting to rekindle their marriage. Desperate to make it work, he must tell the truth and divulge his new career as a janitor.

    steveylang Samurai
    Added an answer on September 28, 2015 at 2:55 pm

    This is a great premise- however that is all that it is, as you have not really described the main plot line. I can see it going many different ways, some dramatic and some comedic. I think this is actually a good rom-com setup, even though you've indicated it's a short.

    This is a great premise- however that is all that it is, as you have not really described the main plot line.

    I can see it going many different ways, some dramatic and some comedic. I think this is actually a good rom-com setup, even though you’ve indicated it’s a short.

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