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  1. Posted: June 24, 2013In: Public

    When a frightened pharmacutical lab tester is tricked into mind control, he has 2000 hours to save and his family who remain trapped in a time continum before his medication runs out and he perishes.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on June 24, 2013 at 5:41 pm

    "Trapped inside a decaying time loop, a naive technician must enter his own mind before a paradox destroys the family he has always wanted." -- Time Heals All Wounds (Alt title)

    “Trapped inside a decaying time loop, a naive technician must enter his own mind before a paradox destroys the family he has always wanted.” — Time Heals All Wounds (Alt title)

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  2. Posted: June 12, 2013In: Public

    A strange parallelepipoid of darkness causes the dawn of humanity then much later its access to a higher level of consciousness

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on June 12, 2013 at 3:20 pm

    The best way when reverse engineering a logline is to look at its IMDb profile: "Humanity finds a mysterious, obviously artificial, object buried deep beneath the lunar surface and, with the intelligent computer H.A.L. 9000, sets off on a quest." 1. Try to keep the explanation of your concept simpleRead more

    The best way when reverse engineering a logline is to look at its IMDb profile:

    “Humanity finds a mysterious, obviously artificial, object buried deep beneath the lunar surface and, with the intelligent computer H.A.L. 9000, sets off on a quest.”

    1.
    Try to keep the explanation of your concept simple.
    ie; A strange parallelepipiod of darkness = Black Monolith

    2.
    It’s always tricky to deal with movies that don’t follow any formalities and are exceptions to the rule. Unless you plan on directing // making the movie, they can be a hard sell. Remember, Kubrick directed “2001: A Space Odyssey” 15 years after his first feature film “Fear and Desire”. In no way am I saying not to do it but rather demonstrate the practicality of the adversity that arises.

    Hope this helps. 😀

    Tor

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  3. Posted: May 16, 2013In: Public

    After his father gives him a job at their small-town newspaper, a conceited journalist buried in debt investigates a sports drug scandal that implicates his athlete brother.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on May 17, 2013 at 7:38 am

    Awesome rewrite :D !! You nailed the father aspect.

    Awesome rewrite 😀 !! You nailed the father aspect.

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