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Desperate for his father?s approval, a conceited journalist takes a job at his small town newspaper. But when he discovers a drug scandal brewing within the local football club, he pursues the story even though it will implicate his athlete brother.
It's an interesting question. I think the under the bus concept would have to be clear. I thought when the "But..." came in, it was a midpoint. Maybe: "... brother's career and a father's love". ?? (this is just a guess) ATM It's a tricky one, but with a little word grease it could work. :D
It’s an interesting question. I think the under the bus concept would have to be clear. I thought when the “But…” came in, it was a midpoint.
Maybe: “… brother’s career and a father’s love”. ?? (this is just a guess)
ATM It’s a tricky one, but with a little word grease it could work. 😀
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Reliving his past lives through hypnotic regression, a dying (occupation)** is hunted by a unknown agent.??? If the agent is making the toughest? moral decision, this makes your protagonist passive. ?? The opening two lines are known as tag lines?. They usually reserve this for marketing purposes. NRead more
Reliving his past lives through hypnotic regression, a dying (occupation)** is hunted by a unknown agent.???
If the agent is making the toughest? moral decision, this makes your protagonist passive. ??
The opening two lines are known as tag lines?. They usually reserve this for marketing purposes.
Nicolasandrewhalls is on the money !!
Hope this helps. 😀
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The change of setting could be ironic to the event // action: "... chases a rehabilitation center's brewing drug scandal..." The dad could have a career choice that ironically reflects the situation: "Seeking the approval of his addiction counsellor father, a..." The journalist is in an ironic positRead more
The change of setting could be ironic to the event // action:
“… chases a rehabilitation center’s brewing drug scandal…”
The dad could have a career choice that ironically reflects the situation:
“Seeking the approval of his addiction counsellor father, a…”
The journalist is in an ironic position:
“… a recovering drug addicted journalist chases a football…”
URGENCY + GOAL = MOTIVATION
I like the concept: Green Street Hooligans meets Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas 😀
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