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  1. Posted: May 15, 2013In: Public

    Desperate for his father?s approval, a conceited journalist takes a job at his small town newspaper. But when he discovers a drug scandal brewing within the local football club, he pursues the story even though it will implicate his athlete brother.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on May 15, 2013 at 5:39 pm

    Your feedback is mindless stupidity at it's worst and the blatant attack towards me is laughable. Best case scenario: READ "Save The Cat!".

    Your feedback is mindless stupidity at it’s worst and the blatant attack towards me is laughable.

    Best case scenario: READ “Save The Cat!”.

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  2. Posted: May 15, 2013In: Public

    "An 86 year old man relives his past lives through hypnotic regression, but in one fateful session, a blurry vision shows him his possible next life and that his current one is about to end soon and the strange man from an unknown agency has to make the toughest moral decision."

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on May 15, 2013 at 4:16 pm

    Firstly, I didn't say they were the protagonist, their actions make your protagonist act passively. Secondly, You may think it clever but your questions are irrelevant, both at the start and end. Thirdly, what else would we be assuming? It's a story! You claim to have done your job with "wondering aRead more

    Firstly, I didn’t say they were the protagonist, their actions make your protagonist act passively. Secondly, You may think it clever but your questions are irrelevant, both at the start and end.
    Thirdly, what else would we be assuming? It’s a story!

    You claim to have done your job with “wondering about it” but the truth is personally I could care less. I highly recommend you read this http://blogs.villagevoice.com/runninscared/2009/09/i_will_not_read.php

    Head over to the “How to” section: https://loglines.org/howto/
    It will answer your questions about what is a logline.

    “… pitch an idea to someone interested…” YOU ANSWER YOUR OWN QUESTION “… interest me to know more…”

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  3. Posted: May 7, 2013In: Public

    When a starving empire?s water mines run dry, two slave girls must revive a mythical power that could save the world.

    Tor Dollhouse
    Added an answer on May 15, 2013 at 3:03 pm

    Did you write the script first or the logline ?? I haven't read the script so Im only going off the logline provided.

    Did you write the script first or the logline ?? I haven’t read the script so Im only going off the logline provided.

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